Instructions for Friday 4/12

Hi all,

My apologies again that I can’t be in class on Friday! Your homework for Monday is to bring in a short text (article, form, document, song lyrics, bill, etc.) that makes you mad or upset, that feels inaccurate or offensive. Be prepared to write on it. We will be making our own found poems. Also, bring Zong!, since we will continue our discussions.

In order to receive participation credit for Friday’s class, please follow the instructions below and post your comment by midnight on Friday. You will need your copy of Zong! handy.

First, watch this video of Phillip reading Zong 17, 18, 19 (29-34). Start from the beginning and watch until about 4:36. You may want to listen twice: once while looking at the poems she is reading and once without, to take it all in.

Next, please listen to this short lecture (20 mins), which will help you answer one of the discussion questions below. Follow along in your book. (Bonus = my cat interjects throughout!)

In your comment, please respond to one of the following discussion questions. You are encouraged to quote from the text and engage with the ideas of your peers.

  • How did watching the video of Phillip reading change the way you read the text? Did it help you see any aspect of the text in a new way?
  • In what sense is this an “impossible” story to tell?
  • How did you read the names at the bottom of each page? What do they suggest?
  • What strategies did you develop for reading these difficult poems?
  • Phillip repeatedly compares the process of writing Zong! To the actual Zong massacre itself. Why? What is she inviting us to think about?
  • Was there a particularly striking detail, pattern, or theme you observed in the poems for today (20-76) that raised an interesting thought or question? Please explain.

Comments are due by midnight on Friday. Looking forward to reading your responses. Have a great weekend and see you Monday!

Finance vs. Power – Zong!

Zong! is a poetry book written by M. NourbeSe Philip. It entails the story of the planned murder of slaves that were being transported on the slave ship Zong. The massacre was to be done in order to collect insurance money. The ship was setting sail from the West Coast of Africa to Jamaica. It held a cargo of 470 slaves.

On page 189, when introducing the massacre, the sentence is structured as such: “Some of Zong’s cargo is lost through illness and lack of water; many others, by order of the captain are destroyed: Sixty negroes died for want of water… and forty others…through thirst and frenzy…threw themselves into the sea and were drowned; and the master and mariners…were obliged to throw overboard 150 other negroes”. It continues in the next paragraph to say “Captain Luke Collingwood is of the belief that if the African slaves on board die of a natural death, the owners of the ship will have to bear the cost, but if they were ‘thrown alive into the sea’, it would be the loss of the underwriters”. To summarize, this means that by massacring the slaves aboard the ship, there would be a financial benefit to the ship owners.

Now, in this paragraph, the slaves being transported are described as “cargo”, which is a term used to describe goods carried on a ship. Given the time period (November of 1781), it’s common knowledge that Africans were treated as property and sold as slaves. It also states on page 194, “The African men, women, and children on board the Zong were stripped of all specificity, including their names. Their financial value, however, was recorded and preserved for insurance purposes, each being valued 30 pounds sterling”. In the United States monetary system, this equals almost forty U.S. dollars. If you flip through the book, the first thing that will catch your eye is the irregular, almost spasmodic positioning of the words on the pages. Could have this been done in order to replicate the feeling of drowning? Given the background information, the arrangement of words on each page could be made to simulate the feeling of drowning- losing air, hope, and eventually, the loss of life.

Anyways, reading through this, I began to wonder if the same thing would have happened if there were no slaves on the ship, but rather white people. This question seems almost illogical, given that Africans were sold and insured as property. However, the slaves were being transported on the ship in order to be bought; in other words, they were on the ship for a reason. So, if this were truly for financial gain, would it have been the same if the passengers were all white? Or would it simply be a tragic massacre, never to be published into the story that Zong! is? If you think it would not be the same if the slaves were white, do you think this massacre was partly done for the ship owners to exercise their power over the slaves?

Questions:

  1. How do you imagine this event would have occurred if the slaves were white?
  2. Do you think this massacre was done solely for the financial benefit, or do you think it could have been done to exercise power?

Thematic Analysis: How the Ocean is Used in Zong!

In Zong! By M. NourbeSe Philip the ocean is a very central theme. What the ocean represents is as dynamic as the ocean itself. In Moana, the ocean represents freedom and a break from tradition. In The Life of Pi, the ocean is a prison keeping Pi and the tiger trapped on their small boat. In my eyes, the ocean is a mystery, somewhere we don’t fully understand yet. Being on the ocean changes someone too. In Moana and The Life of Pi, being on the ocean caused them to grow up in a positive way. In Moby Dick the ocean drives Captain Ahab mad in his pursuit of the whale. All of these different views and experiences can be mashed together to give us a taste of Zong!.

    First let’s look at our first taste of the ship, in the end of Citizen. The image as a whole evokes a feeling of Thalassophobia (fear of the ocean). The waves crashing against the boat makes me feel pessimistic about the future. I feel this can be representative to the conflict between civilization and the cruelty found in human nature. Specifically The way the boat (one of the advanced forms of transportation at the time) is just a toy compared to the wave and might of the ocean. Also fear inducing is the site of the fish eating the overboard slaves. A large component of thalassophobia is that you don’t know what’s underneath you. You can assume what you want about what’s swimming around you, but you don’t know for sure what they are and what their intentions are until too late. Like the slaves on the ship could only assume what the intentions of the crew was. Based on my background in a christian house, I also immediately thought the zoomed-in image was reminiscent of Hell. The scarlet reds imbued in the waves reminds me of dancing fires. The soulless eyes of the fish and awkward scaling of the birds carry haunting demonic forms. In this picture, the ocean is clearly not a good place to be. The author contrast this with the quote on page 2 “The sea was not a mask.” A mask is used in literature as a way to hide shame, such as in Lord of the Flies. In our text however we can’t let the crew use the ocean like this. We need to hold them accountable for their actions. As Turner seems to hint at the ocean being a cruel location where unspeakable horrors happen, Philip argues that the cruel location is in fact not the ocean, but the hearts of us.

    Another aspect of water present is that water alters how we perceive things. At a metaphorical level, the shape of water is undefined and dynamic, much like the shapes of the poems themselves. This can be very confusing when first opening the book. I vividly remember taking my first look back in January, and immediately setting it back down as a problem for future Liam.  The confusing shape of the poems also relates to how the Philip felt writing this piece. We learn in the end section that she wasn’t sure what the main focus of this paper would be. The internal conflict she felt could be seen as waves crashing over each other, as each idea she had was washed away by something else she wanted to do.

Question one: What does the ocean symbolize to you? Even if you don’t live near the ocean, what are ways you see it come up in literature?

Question two:What was your initial reaction to seeing the structure of the poems? What did the structure make you assume about the poems?

Use of the word “YOU”: Citizen An American Lyric

In the last section of the book, Citizen: An American Lyric, by Claudia Rankine one word that is commonly referred to is the word “you”. The definition of you is used to refer to the person or people the speaker is addressing. With this we can assume that the author, Rankine, wants the reader to be put in the position of the “minority”. Giving us the thoughts and feelings to get through the mission of everyday racism. In the quote, “Nobody notices, only you’ve known, you’re not sick, not crazy, not angry, not sad- It’s just this, you’re injured” (Rankine 145); I get the understanding that when she says “you’re injured” she is speaking about the physical, psychological, and emotional instability these people endured. Evidence that may support this is “The worst injury is feeling you don’t belong so much to you-” (Rankine 146). By what Rankine is saying by this is even though you are a person and know you are, others see you’re skin color and race as second class citizens.

One the final page of the book there is a close up picture and the zoomed out picture. In the close up view, you see a black leg with chains, birds, and fish swimming. The chained leg symbolizes the hardships and struggles that African American culture has faced. Whereas, the birds and fish all symbolize freedom; the freedom to go where ever they would like without judgement and struggles. As one looks at the expanded or zoomed out view there’s more to the picture that can be interpreted. In the background you see a ship which could have two meanings. The first meaning is freedom; the freedom to sail the open sea without restrictions or consequences. The second can be taken another way where they were brought over on ships and taken in as slaves. The beginning of lost rights, hardships, struggles, and finally barriers along the way. These symbols made the saying second class citizens come more into picture.

Discussion Questions:

  1. Looking more closely at the two pictures in the end of the book. What do you think are the symbols the author is trying to get across the reader’s mind?
  1. The word “you” is used heavily in the second half of the reading. What do you think the word “you” is being interpreted as? After understanding the use of the word “you”, do you feel that you were put in the position of the author was?

Microaggresions in The Citizen

Towards the end of section VII of The Citizen, Claudia Rankine describes a situational first-person event in which a micro aggression takes place. “Yesterday, I begin, I was waiting in the car for time to pass. A woman pulled in and started to park her car facing mine. Our eyes met and what passed passed as quickly as the look away. She backed up and parked on the other side of the lot. I could have followed her to worry my question but I had to go, I was expected on court, I grabbed my racket” (Rankine, 157).  When first reading this quote, it was quite puzzling to me and it captured my immediate attention. After closely analyzing it, it was fairly obvious that what Rankine did here was make a connection to the troubles suffered by Serena Williams throughout her tennis career. This statement can be interpreted to mean that throughout Serena’s career, she was constantly dealing with adversity from her critics. Even besides the fact Serena is the one of the most decorated and natural talents the tennis world has ever seen, it’s as if her success on the court is insignificant because of the racial backlash she receives. After doing some research online, I found that racism in sports goes beyond just Serena herself. According to studies from the University of Central Florida’s Institute for Diversity and Ethics in Sport, “Acts of racism in sports in the U.S. increased from 31 in 2016 to 41 in 2017. Internationally, there were 79 racist acts in sports”.

Rankine then wraps this story up with the following; “Did you win? he asks. It wasn’t a match, I say. It was a lesson” (Rankine 157). What I found interesting here is that Rankine is again making a comparison into how Serena’s career has been illustrated. These quotes are again describing how Serena’s on field and off field behavior is more significant than the match itself, and I feel that Rankine was demonstrating how Serena must cope with the micro aggressions she encounters. By stating “It was a lesson”, it shows that being quiet and just going out there and playing is unfortunately the only effective way she can go about her business.

Another interesting note I took from this section was that it again mentioned another event in which moving on and being silent was the overall message. In the middle of section VII, Rankine states the following, “Trayvon Martin’s name sounds from the car radio a dozen times each half hour. You pull your love back into the seat because though no one seems to be chasing you, the justice system has other plans. Yes, and this is how you are a citizen: Come on. Let it go. Move on” (Rankine 151). This was interesting to me and I made a connection into how parking scene concluded. This represents another way in which in today’s society, if you are on the receiving end of a microaggresion, letting it go and moving on may be the only effective way to manage your feelings of being racially targeted. You see all around the world today extreme levels of backlash towards people who express their racial encounters have it be on social media, TV, first hand experience, etc. Even professional athletes such as Serena Williams, or in this case an innocent citizen, portray how racism is something that will always be present in their lives, and that accepting it may be a coping strategy.

Discussion questions

1) With Rankines use of Serena Williams as a target of micro aggressions, it represents how sport can illustrate the racial tensions that exist in our world today. As someone who enjoys playing and watching sports, I too have seen many different examples of racist encounters happening.

Q: Have you ever witnessed first-hand a racial event taking place have it be by playing sports, or watching it on TV?

2) A theme I noticed during this section was of accepting defeat and moving on in terms of dealing with micro aggressions. As noted with the Trayvon Martin example and the parking situation in which Rankine states “I had to go, so I grabbed my racket.” This showed to me that
Rankine was making a claim of acceptance of the hardships of our society and how racism is not going away anytime soon.

Q: Do you agree or disagree with the way Rankine demonstrated these examples by the way she expressed walking away and ignoring it?

The Impacts of Racism: Citizen

In the final section of Citizen, by Claudia Rankine, the word “you” is focused on heavily. Within the first few pages of this section, the word “you” was being used so much that I was completely lost. But after reading it over a few times I began to realize that Rankine is trying to emphasize the word “you” to put the readers in the shoes of the black men and women who experience racism on a daily basis. “You are you even before you grow into understanding you are not anyone, worthless, not worth you” (139). In this quote, I believe Rankine is explaining how you are already at a disadvantage once you are born black. Before you even understand who you really are, you are worthless in the rest of society’s eyes due to your skin color. “Even though your own weight insists you are here, fighting off the weight of nonexistence” (139). This quote explains how although your physical weight and body are proof that you exist, that is the only thing fighting off the notion that you are nothing. There are many more examples throughout the first half of this section in which Rankine uses the word “you” to try and impact readers and make the experiences of racism resonate with them more.

In the second half of the final chapter, Rankine revisits the subject of Trayvon Martin. “Trayvon Martin’s name sounds from the car radio a dozen times each half hour. You pull your love back into the seat because though no one seems to be chasing you, the justice system has other plans” (151)”. On July 13th, 2013, George Zimmerman was acquitted in the Trayvon Martin killing. A black citizen hears the news over the radio, and their significant other’s reaction is described. One is angry at the verdict and reacts accordingly, while the other attempts to calm them down. Even though you are not in danger, the justice system will find a way to hurt you. “Yes, and this is how you are a citizen: Come on. Let it go. Move on” (151). As a black citizen, ignoring the unfair circumstances and racism to avoid further problems is a route many take. But should that be the way all people handle situations like this?

On the final page of the book, there is an image that seems to be detailing an ocean with many other features. When I look at it, on the right page I see a black leg with a chain around it, showing that blacks are locked behind barriers in our society. There are fish and rushing water beside it, implying that the black leg is going to be washed away and forgotten. When I then look at the left page, I see a zoomed-out picture, showing the surroundings of that leg. By looking at the left picture first and the right picture second, I feel that there is more emphasis on that leg being washed away and forgotten in a bigger ocean. 

Discussion Questions:

  1. Focusing on the Trayvon Martin section of this blog post, do you think that it is best to sit back and “let it go” when it comes to seeing examples of racism throughout your life, or is it better to step in and act, regardless of what backlash you will receive?
  2. Racism will never fully disappear in my opinion, but at the very least it is important to not let these instances of racism be forgotten (Trayvon Martin). In what ways can we make sure that these issues are never forgotten, and in what ways can we use these unfortunate situations as a learning tool?

Racism in an Era of Colorblindness

In Citizen, an American Lyric, the author Claudia Rankine, composes different ongoing encounters of racism taking place within the twenty-first century. These racist aggressions take place within daily life, daily conversations, among friends, and strangers, as well as within the media. Racism is clearly still present in the world today, and Rankine provides the reader with individual racist encounters written in the second person narrative point of view. Doing this allows for little to no context on who is saying what, and therefore makes the impact of the words being said more powerful. Some of these encounters are slips of the tongue, while others are intentional derogatory comments, meant to be hurtful and offensive. Through the utilization of essays, images, poetry, and more, Rankine composes an “American Lyric” on the effect of racism in what is currently a failing “post-race,” society.

In sections III through V, Rankine continues to describe individual racist encounters of all different kinds. As well as this, in part IV, she begins to touch on the effect of these racist encounters on the individual primarily through the utilization of poetry. Due to the fact that each passage in each chapter is written in the second person narrative point of view, as the reader, you don’t know if this is a composition of racist encounters of one singular person or a collection of many different accounts. Because of this, the velocity and effect of these encounters are increased. Ambiguity as an author is an important strategy, and Rankine is successfully using this technique to her advantage.

In section III of Citizen, we are reminded again of section I, as there are similar types of racist encounters. The first passage of the section is the one that has stuck out to me the most thus far throughout the novel. You and a friend are rushing to meet a friend in a distant neighborhood, and this friend says to you “You are late, you nappy-headed ho” (Rankine 41). She has never code switched like this before, and you are curious as to why she has done it now. Rankine then continues to talk about how perhaps you being late signaled the stereotype of “black people time” and so she attempts to respond with “black people language” (Rankine 41). As I read this racist encounter, it made me think about how commonly and easily college students, of all races, use the N-word in today’s society. Specifically, just on this college campus, I hear it used in everyday conversation more often than it should. The woman who was late was clearly made uncomfortable by the racist comment, and the woman who said it regret saying it and knew that what she said was wrong directly after. In the media, as well as in conversation today, racist slights are thrown around way too often, and way too casually. This is a problem and needs to be stopped. People are so entitled, and feel as if the words that they say won’t have an impact on other people’s feelings. However this is not the case, and no matter the circumstance, racism, in any form, is never okay.

In the article, The New Jim Crow: Mass Incarceration in the Age of Colorblindness, by Michelle Alexander, the author argues that today’s society is experiencing a new Jim Crow era. She writes “In the era of colorblindness, it is no longer socially permissible to use race, explicitly, as a justification for discrimination, exclusion, and social contempt” (Alexander, 262). In a country that is supposed to be blind to race, racism is present despite all historical and social efforts to abolish it. Alexander compares today’s society and racist tendencies in the United States to that of the Jim Crow in the 1950s. On pages 52 and 53 of Citizen, there is an illustration of two separate posters. The first poster reads “I do not always feel colored,” over and over again, and the second poster readers “I feel most colored when I am thrown against a sharp white background.” (Rankine 51-52). This illustration reminded me of Alexander’s article due to the emphasis on color, or lack thereof. The artist does not always feel colored, however, they feel most colored, and most isolated when compared to the color white. Both Citizen, by Claudia Rankine, and The New Jim Crow: Mass Incarceration in the Age of Colorblindness by Michelle Alexander discuss racist encounters that take place today in the United States.

Why do you think Claudia Rankine utilizes a second person narrative point of view in her novel Citizen: An American Lyric?

Do you think reading a novel such as Citizen: An American Lyric, by Claudia Rankine has the potential to illicite change in racist tendencies and encounters in the United States today?

Alexander, Michelle. New Jim Crow: Mass Incarceration in the Age of Colorblindness. New Press, 2016.

Rankine, Claudia. Citizen: an American Lyric. Penguin Books, 2015.

Racism: Black, White and Today

Citizen by Claudia Rankine introduces the fact that there is racism between the black race and white race. When looking at the book that is in front of you, what colors do you see?  There are black bold letters spelling out Citizen and there is also a black hood from a sweatshirt. This hood looks ripped and torn which can resembles how the black race feels compared to the white race. When you continue to look at the book, you may notice that its strictly just black and white, along with some grey areas. While flipping through the pages, you might spot some colored pictures, but there isn’t enough to brighten the book up. This continues to show that society doesn’t see in color very often. Rankine does a great job showing how simple-minded people can be by having the two main colors be black and white.

At the beginning of the text, we are introduced to a twelve-year-old girl. We learn that she is of the black race and is attending a Catholic school. On Page 5, it states: “You never really speak except for the time she makes the request and later when she tells you-you smell good and have feature more like a white person.” This girl is very intelligent as we learn and to learn that she is only spoken to when she “looks more white” is very distasteful. Why is this individual invisible only up until someone needs to “use” her intelligence? Why isn’t this student praised for her academic achievements and why does race have to play a factor in this? In the same sentence it is also states “when she tells you you smell good.” Does smell define race? And why is her smell so important to Mary Catherine?  Sister Evelyn didn’t catch Mary Catherine who was cheating off of the black student. Is she trying to help the white student get away with cheating?  Or is she too nervous to embarrass the black student? The black student never stood up for herself or told Sister Evelyn that Mary Catherine cheated off of her work. Did she just want to feel excepted when she was finally spoken to? This induvial is often ignored because of the fact that she is the only “different” student.

As we continue our journey through part 1 of the text, we learn that racism happens in every day life. On Page 15 it states, “You tell your neighbor that your friend, whom he has met, is babysitting. He says, no its not him. He’s met your friend and this isn’t the nice young man…” Did the neighbor actually go outside of his house to see if it was the friend or did the neighbor make an assumption based on the race of the babysitter? Why was he so quick to judge; if he were in the babysitter’s positions or even the homeowners position, would he like to have had a bad assumption “glued” to him just because of his race?

Overall, after reading each “scenario” in this text, it has really opened my eyes even more with how quickly whites are to judge somebody of a different race. Is it because it has been “engraved” into our heads as a young child or is it because we are to ignorant to finally let the stereotypes go and just accept people for who they really are? With the way society is changing today, I hope that one day black citizens don’t have to feel hurt or have to be cautious when going to a restaurant with a woman that is an alumnus from their college (Rankine 13).

Questions:

As time goes on, do you see racism and the stereotype of the black race going away or do you believe society is going to continue to look at different races with the black and white outlook?

Why do you think Rankine used a picture of a torn-up hood on the cover instead of a different object?

Rankine, Claudia. Citizen: An American Lyric. Minneapolis: Graywolf, 2014. Print.

Culture Differences

Throughout “The Woman Warrior” by Maxine Kingston, the cultural differences between Chinese and American culture are laid out through Kingston’s life. However, in the chapter “In the Western Palace”, cultural differences are laid out between different types of Chinese people who have emigrated into the United States, each with their own ideas and views of both cultures clashing. There is a clear difference as to how Brave Orchid and her children and Moon Orchid, view American culture, marriage, and relationships with the children.

Cultural differences start with how Brave Orchid and Moon Orchid view certain parts of American culture. Brave Orchid regularly denigrates American culture, which she views as wasteful and uncivilized. She constantly compares Chinese culture to American culture, specifically when it comes into contact with the children. When they receive a gift from Moon Orchid, Brave Orchid refers back to tradition, saying that “How greedy to play with presents, in front of the giver.(131)” She refers back to tradition because she views the American way of behavior as “impolite” to her when it’s actually “untraditional” because it is not the Chinese way.

In addition to this, her lack of communication skills toward her children allow for the hidden development of the children’s ideology of wanting to be “American-Normal.” This is because Brave Orchid “which their parents didn’t seem to hear.” consider English to be a “language,” the children may speak it without getting into trouble. Unfortunately, this language barrier dramatically increases the cultural gap between Brave Orchid and her children: Brave Orchid will not master English because it symbolize the barbarous American culture which she rejects, and the children resist speaking Chinese because they want to be “American-normal.” This silence signifies the separation between Brave Orchid’s views on Chinese and American culture, and how her children want to be more assimilated in American Culture. However, Brave Orchid is not fully immune to the effects of American culture, and even succumbs to some ideas of it, such as the American practice of hanging pictures of relatives in the house, such as her and her husbands. When questioned by Moon Orchid by this, she responds saying “No reason. Nothing. . . . In America you can put up anybody’s picture you like.(125)”. While the response seems to be small, it is shown that Brave Orchid is affected by parts of American culture, no matter how much she tries to resist it. Brave Orchid has had plenty of time to observe and pick out parts of American culture she deems as worthy.

Moon Orchid on the other hand, is more or less forced into American culture, and has to view it through the eyes of living with her sister, her sisters children, and confronting her husband. In contrast to Brave Orchid, Moon Orchid emerges as delicate and and not very headstrong. Her “high-class city accent from living in Hong Kong” symbolically reveals a frail woman who has never worked in her life, and who has had servants fulfill her every need. However, she was”eager to work, roughing it in the wilderness.”, when working cleaning dishes and doing laundry with Brave Orchid, despite her comfortable life in China. (135). She also seems not very passive aggressive and constantly has to be told to do something, such as when questioned about her confronting her husband multiple times by Brave Orchid, she responds saying “Do we have to do something?” This shows that she seems rather okay with her husbands actions of having a second wife, as in Chinese culture, the practice of having more than one wife is normal, however this is illegal in American Culture. Moon Orchid also questions Brave Orchid’s children, calling them savages who smelt like cows milk because, “At first she thought they were so clumsy, they spilled it on their clothes. But soon she decided they themselves smelled of milk.”. This is because Moon Orchid does not realize that many Americans drink milk for their entire lives, while Brave Orchids children do not realize that Chinese only drink milk during infancy. This shows the cultural differences between Moon Orchid , Brave Orchid and her children.

Since coming to America, Moon Orchid is forced to assimilate into American culture rather quickly but does not understand how to adjust very well and seems to question why Americans do certain things differently they do in China. In addition, Brave Orchid and the children seem to exhibit different characteristics of both people who accept American culture and want to fit in, and people who reject some ideas of American culture. It is safe to say that both Brave Orchid and her children question Moon Orchids views toward the ideas of assimilating into the American culture to which she does not understand fully yet.

Do you think that Brave Orchid and Moon Orchid’s actions and responses toward American culture are justified? Why or Why not?

If Moon Orchid had the experience and time in American culture just like Brave Orchid and Kingston had before her, do you think Moon Orchid’s views would be similar or different than Brave Orchid’s?

Conference Schedule & Midterm Rough Drafts

  • Small group conferences are mandatory
  • Homework – paste a link to the draft of your essay to our course website beforehand
    • Google Doc set to “Everyone with the link can comment”
  • Bring a device for viewing/commenting on each other’s draft
  • Arrive five minutes early – Old Main 115E
  • We will focus on thesis statements and questions about the assignment
  • The more writing you bring, the more feedback you can get
  • Active, generous, kind, helpful engagement with your peers’ work is part of your participation grade

Conference schedule

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